Guest GameMaster Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 Storm and the X-men had just gotten into their final fight with the phoenix force. They managed to rid the phoenix of Jeans body. Storm went out with Jean to celebrate the return of Jean. However they can’t celebrate for long, before they spot the mighty Galactus on earth once again. They rush to fight him, but just then he leaves. Storm and Jean look around to see why he might have fled; all they find is a young pretty girl who looks just like Galactus. They lash out on the girl who they figure is Galactus' new herald. Galacta was incredibly hungry, so hungry in fact that she was about to collapse. Galactus being her father fed her the great energy she needed to sustain herself. Now she felt more powerful than ever. Just then from out of nowhere two women of great power came at her with all they have got Rules -Jean Grey is at her most powerful. (well second most powerful, she doesnt have the phoenix otherwise is would be unfair) - Galactus gave Galacta a fair amount of his power cosmic for her to feed off of so she isnt hurting right now. - The battle is set on earth. Where storm is most powerful. (I know she can do some things out of the planet but earth is probably the best, she is more used to it there anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Callisto Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 Learn More AboutStormRead more about Storm at WikipediaOfficial Site: Marvel Comics Links: Wikipedia: Storm Uncannyxmen.net: Storm Marvel.com: Storm Jean GreyRead more about Jean Grey at WikipediaOfficial Site: Marvel Entertainment Links: Wikipedia Marvel.com Marvel Directory GalactaRead more about Galacta at WikipediaOfficial Site: Marvel Links: Wikipedia Comic Vine ComicbookDB Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Jason Voorhees fan Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 Since you are new I would like to give you some tips You're set up should be more like a story for a first try this is good. You shouldn't put "Here is what I think Jean and Storm are really powerful so..." It should be more like this "Jean Grey and Storm were having a girls night out..." Then you would tell the story about them and Galacta meeting and then she and the two girls start fighting. You can add how power full they are at the bottom once your are done. Then if it's an arc (Matches that are based around a team or one person) you would in your next match show how the girls or Galacta won. Make sure you look your whole thing over before you send it in. There are mistakes every were like the first line.Jean Grey and Storm are too...That too should be two. There is some capitalization that needs to be done but other then that it's not too bad. Now listen I'm not so great with my matches either I have to put them through Word before I send them in. Please don't take this the wrong way. I hope you make some more matches but this one is one of the matches that would have a really cool set-up. As for that match it's self I'll give it an it's ok because you are new. Oh P.S. If you need help writing a set-up ask some one. Except for Nova Force Nova he will eat you up and spit you out. Hell I'll help you if you just ask for it. As for the match I have no Idea who Galacta is but I have my money on Jean alone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest GameMaster Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 Thanks for the help! I apologize; I am not the best at grammar (I can't believe I put too instead of two). I get it more so now, so all of the matches are stories, I thought only special topics were like that. Is it too late to make a story for this? Because if it weren't, then I think I have a good story for this battle... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DamagingRob Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 You actually should be able to edit your scenario at any time. Matches are posted like an actual post by the creator of the match, so they are able to be edited. Part of the new improvements made recently. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest GameMaster Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 How do you edit? The only buttons I see is MultiQuote and Quote. Oh and by the way, thanks for all the help. I am sorry that I have so many questions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest GameMaster Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 Sorry, that was me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest GameMaster Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 Ok I wasnt logged in... wow I am stupid. I see Edit now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Jason Voorhees fan Posted March 26, 2012 Share Posted March 26, 2012 That is a better scenario but it still needs to be worked on keep on trying and you will get better and better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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