Guest chaditude Posted June 6, 2012 Share Posted June 6, 2012 The decepticons are trying to take over Earth again but in New york city a monster is destroying all in his path but is taken down by a missle.Megatron thretens the beast and says if he spares his life if he goes.Fin fang foom responds by throwing megatron threw stark tower.Ok I guess I will have to kill you,Megatron says angrly.New york city citizins watch as their homes are destroyed only one monster will survive but New york city wont. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Callisto Posted June 6, 2012 Share Posted June 6, 2012 Learn More AboutFin Fang FoomRead more about Fin Fang Foom at WikipediaOfficial Site: Marvel Entertainment Links: Wiki Entry X-Entertainment Marvel Universe Profile MegatronRead more about Megatron at WikipediaOfficial Site: Hasbro Links: Wikipedia: Megatron TF Archive: Megatron Teletraan-1: Megatron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patrickthekid Posted June 7, 2012 Share Posted June 7, 2012 You'll have to write in a setup up, unless you want to write it as a rumble match instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chaditude Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 the decepticans are trying to take over earth again but in new york city a monster destroys all in his path but is taken down by a missle megatron thretens the beast and says he will spare its life if he goes. fin fang foom responds by throwing megatron threw stark tower.Megatron says angrly. Ok i guess i will have to kill you, New york city citizins watch as homes are destroyed only one monster will survive but new york city wont Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSkillz Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 Patrickthekid meant post the set-up in the match's post, man. lol I think you'll want to fix the spelling when and if you do edit the match's post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chaditude Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 sorry got cunfused didnt even mean to put match up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DSkillz Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 So what are you waiting for? Copy/paste that scenario into the match's post, man! And as mentioned, make some corrections. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chaditude Posted June 9, 2012 Share Posted June 9, 2012 foom would melt megatron but megatron could blow him up i am going with foom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leroypowell3 Posted June 9, 2012 Share Posted June 9, 2012 I don't think Foom could melt Megatron. Whatever version of Megatron this is, he's got the good to this alien dragon wannabe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Redemption X Posted June 9, 2012 Share Posted June 9, 2012 Fing Fang Foom and Megatron start fighting, then benfromcanada drags Fing Fang Foom away, yelling about how Foom is racist or magical or some crap like that and that Iron Man should only fight other humans in powered armor, leaving Megatron the winner by default. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marvel Man Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 Hey, what's up Chaditude? Glad you got to posting matches. This match is pretty interesting, both opponents are at an about equal level, but the set up you posted needs some work. The story could be developed more, but even with what you have, you can improve your set up with some spacing, capitalization, and quotation marks. Here's the same set up with modifications:The Decepticons are trying to take over Earth again, but in New York City a monster destroys all in his path. This monster is taken down by a missile. Megatron threatens the beast and says he will spare its life if he leaves. Fin Fang Foom responds by throwing Megatron through Stark Tower. Megatron angrily says, "Ok i guess i will have to kill you." The citizens of New York watch as homes are destroyed. Only one monster will survive but New York City won't. See, your story has a couple plot holes, but it's a start. I hope you keep working on it. Make sure to space out your set up so it doesn't appear as a massive block of text. Use quotation marks or at least ":" to place dialogue apart. And finally, capitalize words that need capitalization. Anyways, for this match I'm going with Megatron. The guy is much smarter than the dragon and has an impressive arsenal. D on the set up though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chaditude Posted June 11, 2012 Share Posted June 11, 2012 thanks i'll work on it next time just in rush on match Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chaditude Posted June 11, 2012 Share Posted June 11, 2012 just so you know the apperence of stark tower does not mean iron man will be in this match he will be in the follow up match iron man vs megatron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marvel Man Posted June 11, 2012 Share Posted June 11, 2012 Haha. Alright. Cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chaditude Posted June 11, 2012 Share Posted June 11, 2012 oh and how do you sign up for june challenge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSkillz Posted June 11, 2012 Share Posted June 11, 2012 oh and how do you sign up for june challenge Heh, a newer user's thinking of signing up? I like the spirit of it, at least. Next time, though, post questions like this in either the topic in question or the FAQ forum. But yeah, just make your match for the challenge before the deadline (try to make sure it follows the challenge's guidelines or it may get disqualified) and post the link to it in the challenge's topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest chaditude Posted June 11, 2012 Share Posted June 11, 2012 THANKS I WILL START WORKING ON IT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Callisto Posted June 11, 2012 Share Posted June 11, 2012 Match Final ResultsUSER RATINGS F C Thumbs up for writing up a little something on a accidental set up. Appreciate it. D Keep working on it. Best of luck on next match. F No set-up. F SCORE Fin Fang Foom: 12Megatron: 21FPA: 0.9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest MarvelFan15 Posted June 11, 2012 Share Posted June 11, 2012 It amuses me how the match results are numerical palindromes of one another. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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