DSkillz Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 Good set-up, anu. Power Girl and a Galactus-controlled Surfer are pretty well in character here. Still watch the run-ons, and try to make a way to differenciate between the speaking dialogue and the psychic dialogue. As for the match, yeah, Radd takes this. He has too many powers to lose, and since he's completely under Galactus's control, he's very likely not going to hold back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest anu Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 I don't watch run ons, I don't watch grammar I just write. Seems pointless to me for you guys to keep saying that stuff. I really think you should just let the grammar stuff go, its about fun not structure of sentences. No offense, just be glad we write and give activity to your forum..why isn't that enough? Just leave the comments out about the grammar stuff I am not changing..if its not good enough for you then fine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest bigballerju Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 Grammer becomes important when people can't understand what your saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AVP vs The Terminator Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 I don't watch run ons, I don't watch grammar I just write. Seems pointless to me for you guys to keep saying that stuff. I really think you should just let the grammar stuff go, its about fun not structure of sentences. No offense, just be glad we write and give activity to your forum..why isn't that enough? Just leave the comments out about the grammar stuff I am not changing..if its not good enough for you then fine... It's called "criticism". If you don't learn to take it, you'll never be a good writer. You don't have to take it, but expect to be graded accordingly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest anu Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 I KNOW I am not a good writer and honestly I don't care how good or bad I seem to anyone. I write and go with it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Callisto Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 Match Final ResultsUSER RATINGS B B Good setup and it set up the fight perfectly. B Good story and characterization. Just watch the sentence structure and differenciate between thoughts and spoken word a little better. C Very confusing and difficult to understand. Silver Surfer was rather out of character, too. Also a large mismatch in his favor. F The grammar sucks. A B Not a bad set up sir. SCORE Power Girl: 7The Silver Surfer: 40FPA: 2.6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AVP vs The Terminator Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 An F? Wow, that was waay too harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest anu Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 Personal Bias, my last battle was not written any better than that one and it looks like they didn't like my comments. So they put their personal feelings into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest anu Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 How is Surfer out of character when as we all know at one time he supported galactus? I didn't deserve and F they just don't like my views. Wow...I get an A on my last one and a B on this one. CBUB is so unfair and Callisto is biased. Yeah I said it. UNFAIR and BIASED! Nobody here is an EXPERT!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest force_echo Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 Don't shit your pants Anu. Also, how can a bot be biased you idiot, that's like saying a rock is a dumbass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Shoggoth breeder Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 Edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Shoggoth breeder Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 How is Surfer out of character when as we all know at one time he supported galactus? I didn't deserve and F they just don't like my views. Wow...I get an A on my last one and a B on this one. CBUB is so unfair and Callisto is biased. Yeah I said it. UNFAIR and BIASED! Nobody here is an EXPERT!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSkillz Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 Damn, who gave out that "F"? An FPL guy? Seriously, that "F" is very curious, and may have to be looked into. I gave this a "B" myself. The third one on the list in Callisto's post, in fact. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest bigballerju Posted June 20, 2012 Share Posted June 20, 2012 I gave it a B. I know alot of people on here grade matches differently. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peypeypeypey Posted June 20, 2012 Share Posted June 20, 2012 I really should have rated this, I just never got around to reading it. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xman4life Posted June 21, 2012 Share Posted June 21, 2012 silver surfer in a stomp. speed wise ss is faster very very much so. be is many many times ftl. strength i will say equal because he can increase his strength. and as far as power she stands NO chance. not even a slim one. he can iterally turn her into a rock, or turn her outfit into kryptonite. the odds are sooo stacked against her. sorry bro its a stomp for even superman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sirmethos Posted June 21, 2012 Share Posted June 21, 2012 No, the Surfer is not faster. At least not in any way that affects the outcome of a fight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xman4life Posted June 21, 2012 Share Posted June 21, 2012 i was meaning in overall faster. like he could travel from pluto to earth in half a second. meaning THAT (travelling speed) but as far as fight speed her reflexes might be faster but still all in all he has multiple ways to kill her while she only has 1(fight). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest bigballerju Posted June 21, 2012 Share Posted June 21, 2012 Powergirl can hit light speed very easily like most Kryptonians which she has not only said but shown in her own comics and in the JSA. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AVP vs The Terminator Posted June 21, 2012 Share Posted June 21, 2012 Kryptonians need to build up their speed to go that fast, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest bigballerju Posted June 21, 2012 Share Posted June 21, 2012 Actually it doesn't take them that long to build up to light speed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest force_echo Posted June 21, 2012 Share Posted June 21, 2012 Superman doesn't. The only I've seen him actually building up speed to go past the light speed barrier is when he was trying to increase his mass to achieve an effect like Flash's IMP. Most of the time, like when he broke through the double black hole, he just flies, and he's past light speed extremely quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest silversurfer092 Posted June 22, 2012 Share Posted June 22, 2012 I KNOW I am not a good writer and honestly I don't care how good or bad I seem to anyone. I write and go with it... Wait, so you say this. Yet you flip a complete bitch when you get a bad grade? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xman4life Posted June 22, 2012 Share Posted June 22, 2012 Either way the issue is that when it comes to things moving fast, Thor and silver surfer dont have issues with things like that because they can both move ftl, have ftl reflexes and track objects movng faster than light. so her speed blitzing him wont work or matter the matter manip, time manip, phasing, telekinesis will slow her down.lmao. she stands no chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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