Guest Dr. Pymp(mex) Posted July 2, 2012 Share Posted July 2, 2012 Somewhere in Canada 2012 The days passed and it seemed that Zero would be completing missions for the rest of his life. He was able to achieve glory through his work, but he knew that he was killing people, whether or not they were evil. Zero had some time off from his last mission and was taking some much needed R & R. He travelled to a secluded part of Canada were he would often go to hide from even his employers. His life as a mercenary led him to see things that no normal human would ever see. He travelled the world with some great and famous people, such as Wolverine, Captain America and other warriors. He never questioned his missions and the times he felt like he shouldn't take a certain mission he remembered that everyone had a job to do. His next mission came in the form of a small letter that was waiting for him after he came back from the store, it was addressed to a Mr. Maverick. He was surprised that anyone knew where he was, even more that he was being watched somehow. The letter read, so not do your next mission, I cannot tell you why but you will need to walk away. Months went by and he eventually got a call from Department H. He was not surprised that he was called, as his job required him to kill. He was surprised at the nature of the mission. He was to travel to New York, and kill a little girl. It was mote detailed than that, but overall a little would have to die. Thinking about the letter he hesitated to accept the mission, but seeing his bank account he only had 200.00 and had rent due soon. He takes the mission and is paid a small amount to get the job done. He arrives and rents a room at a random motel, gathers his things and heads off. A few weeks later he has begun tracking his target, he studies her, her habits and her past. Nothing about her is weird, she's clean. He takes a moment to think, does he kill her and get paid 100k or does he walk away? As he thinks he notices himself loading his weapons out of insctincts and decides to get paid. A large energy blast hits him and knocks him to the ground. His powers absorbed the hit, and as he gets up he sees a large black man garbed in an x-men outfit. He has a huge gun and has his eyes glowing. Zero prepares for a fight and asks who he is. Bishop introduces himself as he hoots several shots from his small canon. He tells him that by killing this girl he will destroy his future. She is the descendant of a future mutant that will help fight Apocalypse. Zero unwilling to accept that fires back Who will win Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Callisto Posted July 2, 2012 Share Posted July 2, 2012 Learn More AboutAgent ZeroRead more about Agent Zero at WikipediaOfficial Site: Marvel Comics Links: Wikipedia Marvel Directory UncannyXmen.Net BishopRead more about Bishop at WikipediaOfficial Site: Marvel Comics Links: Bishop WIki Entry Mutant High-Bishop Marvel Directory-Bishop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSkillz Posted July 2, 2012 Share Posted July 2, 2012 Clock is ticking, Pymp. Really should've typed it out on Notepad before picking the characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dr. Pymp(mex) Posted July 2, 2012 Share Posted July 2, 2012 It will be there tonight or tomorrow. I have it mostly done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LoneWolf Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 I see Zero taking this. Kinetic energy absorption vs blast energy absorption. I'd take kinetic. Depending on what Bishop is wielding, he might be in trouble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dr. Pymp(mex) Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 Thanks Lone Wolf, I had it almast done and had to just put what I have now. I got stuck working a lot this week. I tried to go for a new style of writing but I still need lots of work. Oh and thanks for rating y June Match fight. It was so so but I tried Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSkillz Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 Good to see your match is finally up, Pymp. Unfortunately, people have probably been grading it up to this point. Anyways, pretty good match but it could've been filled out a bit more. As for the match, I'd have to say Zero probably takes it. Skill may be negligible here, but Zero's absorption abilities seem more diverse and unlike Bishop, he has a slight healing factor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dr. Pymp(mex) Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 Thanks D, I got caught up with work and would have loved to expand. This is what I had as a premise and well next time I will hold off until it's done. Oh and for the grades I do this for the love of it. I love this site and visit here when I am able to. Would you point me in a good premise so I can do a better job? i.e. Pick me two people and what it should be maybe that will help me out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kainboa Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 I see Zero taking this. Kinetic energy absorption vs blast energy absorption. I'd take kinetic. Depending on what Bishop is wielding, he might be in trouble. Let me put it in a slightly different way. Zero can only absorb kinetic energy, where Bishop can absorb any kind of energy, and Zeros energy absorbing power is relatively minor. That puts a somewhat different spin on things doesn't it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest skadoosh Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 I'd say Bishop has the superior energy-absorbing ability, but Zero is probably more a skilled combatant, being a highly trained special agent rather than a rag-tag warrior from the desolate future, but i could be wrong about that. And i'm not really sure who wins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LoneWolf Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 Let me put it in a slightly different way. Zero can only absorb kinetic energy, where Bishop can absorb any kind of energy, and Zeros energy absorbing power is relatively minor. That puts a somewhat different spin on things doesn't it?I'm pretty sure Bishop can only absorb *Non-Kinetic* energy. Gambit's card knocked him out, also people have had no problem fighting him with punches before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LoneWolf Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 According to Marvel Series 3, Bishop was 2 ton strength and a very good fighter (6/7). There were no stats for Maverick or Agent Zero at that time. But I'd imagine they aren't quite up to that point. I think what it comes down to is weapons used by each. If they just unleash full power shots on each other and one guy soaks it up and amps himself and the other guy is stunned, I think the fight will be over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest sirmethos Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 I'm pretty sure Bishop can only absorb *Non-Kinetic* energy. Gambit's card knocked him out, also people have had no problem fighting him with punches before. He can absorb kinetic energy as well. He was able to absorb the kinetic energy from snowflakes hitting him. Each snowflake is only a minimal amount of energy, but it adds up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hayesmeister5651 Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 Set up seems rushed. I've seen you do better pymp. You get a C from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest bigballerju Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 Bishop is more experienced and is more skilled with the war he fought in the future. Bishop also is a better strategist and has more powerful weapons he uses that are technology from the future just like Cable. Bischop wins. Setup gets a C and yes Pymp has done better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LoneWolf Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 Considering it doesn't say what weapons each are equipped with, I voted Bishop due to higher stats. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dr. Pymp(mex) Posted July 5, 2012 Share Posted July 5, 2012 Yea it was not rushed, but I couldn't finish and so had to put what I had done Thanks for the comments though and the grades Oh and standard weapons like Bishop has in every picture he is in is what he has, Zero has a semi auto rifle and a knife as he did not expect to fight anyone but just shoot the girl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest L.I.C. (-Large In Charge-) Posted July 5, 2012 Share Posted July 5, 2012 Difficult for me to say here! This match has the back and forth effect, I think! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marvel Man Posted July 5, 2012 Share Posted July 5, 2012 Mex! Yeah, I've seen you write some good matches on these boards. This isn't your best work, but a couple mistakes won't bother me. Also, the mental picture of Agent Zero worried about his rent was pretty funny. Like what type of thing would he waste his money on? As for this match, Bishop is a tricky fighter. Guy is hardcore AND his powers have such a versatile nature. Having said that, I too agree that Zero is the superior fighter and probably more motivated (he's got to get that rent money!). While it could easily go Bishop's way, I'm going with Zero. Agent Zero ftw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Pymp(mex) Posted July 5, 2012 Share Posted July 5, 2012 Thanks Marvel. I am not a great writer to begin with and appreciate your comments. I did have this down as notes and meant to fill in the blanks along with all grammar and sentence structure, but alas my two jobs needed me to work extra ad had no time. I did like the part about his rent money, I mean how else would he pay it? He doesn't seem like the type to have gone to school or have a sit down job. Where as bishop has no rent and wants to protect his future, or present lol. So it would have been a much better read and promise that the next one will have it do as intended. The match up itself is good as both can kill each other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Callisto Posted July 7, 2012 Share Posted July 7, 2012 Match Final ResultsUSER RATINGS F There's no set-up. C C C C A A The improvement is obvious. Keep it up! C A C Had potential for a good story, but could've been worked on and fleshed out more. F Get the set-up up there faster. SCORE Agent Zero: 11Bishop: 27FPA: 2.3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DamagingRob Posted July 7, 2012 Share Posted July 7, 2012 Ouch. That's why you should try to have the set-up ready beforehand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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