Guest cat king Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 In a boxing fight, it's patrick on this corner and king hippo on this corner. King hippo delivers a powerful face smash and slam, patrick is dazed but he delivers a couple of belly blows to king hippo. K.H. pants fell down his embarrassed, then patrick crouch kicks him, K.H. fell down in pain. his up again and is angry and punches patrick tons of times, patrick gets his towel and whips king hippos butt. Then patrick takes out his rock and is going to smash king hippo, king hippo catches it but he looks tired and may not support it is he stronger than patrick? And winner? you choose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Callisto Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 Learn More AboutPatrick StarRead more about Patrick Star at WikipediaOfficial Site: www.nick.com Links: Wikipedia Patrick Star Spongebob Wikia King HippoRead more about King Hippo at WikipediaOfficial Site: Nintendo Links: Wikipedia Punch Out Wiki Giant Bomb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSkillz Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 You need to work on making more of a story, cat king. For example, try to make the story more coherent, add some dialogue, explain why the characters are fighting, etc., etc. And Patrick, being barely larger than a human hand, would get squashed underfoot by Hippo, who is a much-larger-than-average human. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest stargazer69 Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 yeah this is not a good match. Patrick is too stupid to put on gloves. this isnt even funny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cat king Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 stargazer69 it makes perfect sense, look how much they look alike Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crzyrkrdd Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 But doesnt patrick have some type of toonforce to help him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cat king Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 maybe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest MarxzVulpez Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 If this is Patrick's bulk form from Fry Cook Games, then he probably stands somewhat of a chance. He's screwed otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cat king Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 IT'S A BOXING FIGHT DSKILLZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSkillz Posted August 25, 2012 Share Posted August 25, 2012 IT'S A BOXING FIGHT DSKILLZ Okay, but how are they going to box when Hippo is literally tens of thousands of times Patrick's size? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cat king Posted August 26, 2012 Share Posted August 26, 2012 Didn't you read the paragraph Dskills. It says that patrick kicks king hippo in the crouch, how could patrick do that if he's tens of thousand of times smaller? Don't judge the match! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSkillz Posted August 26, 2012 Share Posted August 26, 2012 You should've really explained as much within the match itself, then, as well as why they're fighting, etc. It makes for better storytelling, and it may encourage the Match Judges to give you better grade, therefore improving your Fight Points Average. Okay, I'm going to assume that Hippo and Patrick are the same size. Hippo is the more skilled boxer, for sure, but Patrick has some toon force Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cat king Posted August 26, 2012 Share Posted August 26, 2012 well it shows why they're fighting in the match and it shows how big patrick is in the fight when he hit king hippo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSkillz Posted August 26, 2012 Share Posted August 26, 2012 Still not getting it. If you truly want to make good and great stories for matches, you need to add more detail. The ones I mentioned are just a few that could be added to improve your matches. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Pinkelly1 Posted August 27, 2012 Share Posted August 27, 2012 king hippo would win. patrick is an idiot, well he did win a boxing match before... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest justin Posted August 27, 2012 Share Posted August 27, 2012 i want some tutoring Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cat king Posted August 27, 2012 Share Posted August 27, 2012 Does it really matter dskillz of how much details in it and so what why does it need detail for a grade, I don't care if there' detail I just want to make a good match Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSkillz Posted August 27, 2012 Share Posted August 27, 2012 For the most part, detail does matter if you want to write a good or great story, and in turn, get good grades from the Match Judges. Otherwise, if you just want to make matchups instead of matches, you should really make them in the Rumbles Forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Pinkelly1 Posted August 27, 2012 Share Posted August 27, 2012 i like this matchup. its better than mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cat king Posted August 27, 2012 Share Posted August 27, 2012 I understand matches need detail and I have detail in the fight if you actually read dskillz, you need to see what I wrote in a picture in your head so there. So, STOP, TELLING, WHAT,I, NEED, TO, ADD, TO, MY, MATCHES'!!!!!! BAH! And Greedo shot first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DamagingRob Posted August 27, 2012 Share Posted August 27, 2012 And I might load you into a cannon, and light the fuse. F.Y.I., that statement just shows how young you (probably) are. DSkillz is trying to save you from getting bad ratings, and never being able to rise in the ranks. When all of your matches get scratched, you'll remain at Rank 5 for the remainder of your stay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cat king Posted August 27, 2012 Share Posted August 27, 2012 I get damagingrob but does he need to say it every time I right a match it's really getting on my nerves and I'll put you in a 8 pound cannon and fire you to st Helena island. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DamagingRob Posted August 27, 2012 Share Posted August 27, 2012 Maybe not, if it appears the person doesn't want to listen. He is the only mod that seems to give a crap about the CBUB section, for the most part, though, and gives good advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest potterpuppetpals Posted August 28, 2012 Share Posted August 28, 2012 King Hippo stomps Patrick. Literally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest cat king Posted August 28, 2012 Share Posted August 28, 2012 I agree motaro with two legs was a big mistake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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