megarock58 Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 edit: please delete this post now! forget i even posted this stupid match. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Callisto Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 Learn More AboutJustice LeagueRead more about Justice League at WikipediaOfficial Site: DC Comics Links: Wikipedia Entry Justice League Library JLU Official Website The AvengersRead more about The Avengers at WikipediaOfficial Site: Marvel Entertainment Links: Wikipedia Marvel.com IMDb The 2012 ApocalypseRead more about The 2012 Apocalypse at WikipediaOfficial Site: Public Domain Links: Wikipedia Imdb RationalWiki Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patrickthekid Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 The apocolypse hasn't happened yet. So so far so good for our heroes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest khoi Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 Team 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest potterpuppetpals Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 Please start using correct grammar in your next match, megarock. It's very hard to read your matches. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megarock58 Posted December 21, 2012 Author Share Posted December 21, 2012 Please start using correct grammar in your next match, megarock. It's very hard to read your matches.stop trashing my work and just vote. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dinsdale Piranha Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 If the planet's only a few miles from the earth, the heroes have only miliseconds to act Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dinsdale Piranha Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 Sorry, couldn't resist. I have a few questions before answering this. 1. How big is Nibiru? (The linked article says possibly as big as Jupiter but it doesn't say whether it means in mass or volume.)2. Is Nibiru a terrestrial (solid) planet or a gas giant like Jupiter.3. Is Nibiru inhabited by an advanced race of aliens as some conspiracy theorists believe. If so, do they have technology that could help or hinder the heroes and what are their intentions?4. What version of the characters are we dealing with here? If this is the Silver Age JLA, this is a lot easier to figure out. I would want to resassign the Hulk. He will not be very helpful in rescuing civilians and has saved the earth from a collision event before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tomisntblue Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 I remember when it was only characters that got accepted into the database. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patrickthekid Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 I remember when it was only characters that got accepted into the database.Yeah, those were good times. *rages about feeling old again* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest khoi Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 Oh no....DON'T KILL ME! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest khoi Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 And.....200TH POST! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C.T. Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 stop trashing my work and just vote. That's not trashing. That's criticism and quite frankly you should fix those errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Dinsdale Piranha Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 Tis true. There's nothing wrong with your match up, but the more clearly you express what's happening, the better readers will be able to understand it and the more interested they will be in voting and commenting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kainboa Posted December 22, 2012 Share Posted December 22, 2012 There's barely any story, and what's there is so badly written that it might as well be non-existent, there is no characterization to speak off, and considering the power shared on team one, it's a massive stomp match in their favor, even considering the fairly large error you've made in placing the Nibiru planet only a few miles away from earth. Also, your general attitude when presented with valid yet polite critique of your grammar, drags the rating down. All in all, I'm giving this an F rating, and I'd urge you to either stick with rumbles, or vastly improve your writing skills if you plan on making more actual matches. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest khoi Posted December 22, 2012 Share Posted December 22, 2012 Yeah the story is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Shadow Flesh Posted December 22, 2012 Share Posted December 22, 2012 From the effort and detail put in the match this is at best a rumble. Try adding more substance to your set-ups in the future. Outside of that the choice of putting the Planet miles away from Earth is probably a mistake, as that would mean it should hit earth in less than a few second giving team 1 no time to react That being said... Silver-Age Superman can still save the day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest potterpuppetpals Posted December 22, 2012 Share Posted December 22, 2012 stop trashing my work and just vote. But I said the magic word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest The Lord Dragon Reborn Posted December 25, 2012 Share Posted December 25, 2012 Why did you delete the story? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Austo191 Posted December 25, 2012 Share Posted December 25, 2012 What's sad is that this isn't a bad concept for a match. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSkillz Posted December 25, 2012 Share Posted December 25, 2012 Just noticed this edit. edit: please delete this post now! My answer to this? Uh uh. I think I'll explain why after Christmas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest potterpuppetpals Posted December 25, 2012 Share Posted December 25, 2012 Don't bow to his wishes, or we might end up breeding another anu or redemtion x. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSkillz Posted December 26, 2012 Share Posted December 26, 2012 As promised, I'm back. I'm not going to delete this match, because, simply, we can't go around deleting matches every time someone doesn't want to hear some light criticism. Content on this site is only edited, closed, etc. if it becomes disruptive to the site as a whole for some reason (i.e., the content is or starts a troll/flame fest, is an ad, plagiarizes someone else's work, etc.). Besides, Fox has made it known that he'd rather the mod team not outright delete official matches. There are other ways to deal with them. It's true that a point of this site is to have fun, but another point of this site is to improve your writing (which you can have fun doing, too). So, in short, as mentioned, if you don't want to hear critiques like seen here or worse, either work to improve your match writing or it might be best for you to stick to the rumbles. Don't bow to his wishes, or we might end up breeding another anu or redemtion x. Heh, I've never seen anyone here bow to them. And that wouldn't stop their whining anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest potterpuppetpals Posted December 26, 2012 Share Posted December 26, 2012 Well if a match went stale they would usually ask for the match to die and such. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Callisto Posted December 26, 2012 Share Posted December 26, 2012 Match Final ResultsUSER RATINGS F F Deleting a match's content? No good. D F C It was a good idea. The content needed work. But you still put in the effort. Don't give up! leroypowell3 SCORE Justice League and The Avengers: 28The 2012 Apocalypse: 3FPA: 0.9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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