Match 14229 Khan Noonien Singh vs. James T. Kirk (New Version)

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"There she is" Khan said rising from his seat on the USS Reliant 

He see's the USS Enterprise appear on the Viewscreen

"Khan there hailing us"

"Let them see us" Khan said

"Im captain James T Kirk of the USS Enterprise to USS Reliant are you in need of assistance..... Who are you?" Kirk said 

"Captain I thought you were a admiral?" Khan said since hearing Chekov speak on the Bontany bay a few days go. He was also confused as this Kirk looked as young as he did all those years ago when he had tried to kill him on the USS Enterprise.

"You have me at a disadvantage state who you are and where is the captain of the reliant?" Kirk said confused at how this old man seemed to know him

"I my dear "Captain " is Khan noonien Singh but I'm tired of this ignorance you seem to have Kirk from hells heart I stab at thee

Khan cut the communication and gave the order to fire all weapons

(This is the original Khan he has the USS Reliant but no Genesis weapon board. This is New Kirk on his Enterprise with his crew. They have not met Khan so have no idea who he is or his capabilities)

[Callisto]

Learn More About

Khan Noonien Singh

Read more about Khan Noonien Singh at Wikipedia

Official Site: Paramount Pictures Links: Khan Wiki Entry StarTrek.com Movies Memory Alpha

 

James T. Kirk (New Version)

Read more about James T. Kirk (New Version) at Wikipedia

Official Site: Paramount Pictures Links: Wikipedia Memory Alpha-Kirk Krik-Star Trek

 

 

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Match Final Results

USER RATINGS

Dark Spider-man gives it a grade of: C

DSkillz gives it a grade of: D Writing needs a bit of work here. The story was confusing, and more detail would've helped clear things up. Also, there were spelling and grammar issues.

SCORE

Khan Noonien Singh: 8

James T. Kirk (New Version): 7

FPA: 1.5