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Match 18393 Sydney Bristow vs. Mike Ehrmantraut


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In the coffee shop, Sydney and Ava shot at each other. The bullets when through the table strategy they had taken cover behind. Sydney ran out of bullets and Ava took the opportunity to get a clear shot. 
 
Sydney was able to throw a coffee cup at Ava. Ava jumped out of the way and Sydney kicked the gun out of Ava's hand. They fought each other with several kicks and punches. 
 
Sydney was able to kick Ava onto the floor. Ava crawled away and reached for her gun. Sydney jumped on top of her and started punching her in the face. Ava was able to push Sydney off of her and grabbed her gun.
 
Ava aimed her gun at Sydney but Sydney was able to knocked the gun away. Sydney took out a knife and stabbed Ava in the stomach. Ava fell on the floor and started bleeding out. Sydney picked up Ava's gun. She asked who hired her.
 
Ava told her that she did not know. She was given a job to kill Sydney's husband but was not told why. Someone else had taken the kids. Ava had regrets but said that the information for the one that took the kids was on her phone. Ava said that the person that took her Syndey's kids was also hired by someone else. Ava did not know who.
 
Sydney took Ava's phone and then shot Ava in the head. She went back to the safe house. Marcus eventually came and they started to hack into the phone. They found that the person that took her kids was former police officer and now a hit man for hire. His name is Mike Ehrmantraut.
 
Sydney asked where Mike was. Marcus went to check with one of his contacts and came back. He told her that Mike was last spotted into Washington D.C. Sydney too the information and headed to Washington D.C.
 
She disguised herself with a beach blonde wig and glasses. After looking into one of the addresses that Marcus gave her, Sydney found where Mike was staying and snuck into his hotel. She could not find any trace of her kids. Mike opened the door to the hotel room and took out his pistol. Sydney immediately jumped for cover and took out her pistol. 
 
Mike said that he would give her only one chance to walk away. Sydney asked for her kids and she was not leaving until she had them. Then Mike told her that she would not be leaving alive. 
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The spacing and extra detail are definite improvements, StormChaser. :) Now let's see if you can add even more detail and add some dialogue in your next one. 

As for the match, I know about as much about Mike as I do about Ava (which is about nothing, lol), so I can't vote on a winner for this one, either. 

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After thinking about it, I feel like Sydney may take this one. She is younger, faster and more agile

Mike's a bit on the older side which may be the determinating factor

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Match Final Results

Member Ratings:
4.00 - patrickthekid
3.70 - Boratz
4.20 - DSkillz
3.80 - Mercenaryblade

FPA Calculation:
4 Total Votes cast
15.70 Total Combined Score
15.70 / 4 = 3.92 Final Rating on the match

MATCH SCORE
Sydney Bristow: 3
Mike Ehrmantraut: 1

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